One day when you wake up, you'll realize,
that you did away the best thing that ever happened to you..
One day you'll wake up and realize how incomplete you are,
and that you no more have the one who would make a rhyme out of you..
One day you'll wake up and realize that you miss the lips,
that use to smile only for you..
One day you'll wake up and realize that you miss that someone,
who use to alwayz think about you..
One day you'll wake up and realize that you love the person,
who used to love you, but you just did not buy the worth ,
and may be that one day..
I will wake up with the one, who already knew all this..
6 comments:
good 1 dude but still work on it .... use some more rhyming word... kash koi ise jaa ke meri gf ko padhaye aur samjaaye k kitna pyaar karta hu mein ussse......
thanks bro for this poem
glad 2 see u comment, bt its on purpose..so tt there is incompleteness..and neway..not all poems rhyme :-)
well its nice as always.. and only basic poems rhyme.. maybe u can rearrange the sequence from incompletion to the conclusion..
but still, this has a natural flow.. :) keep up the good work..
well vini..if only u cud understand the stuff written in hindi as well! :(
and here, can u pls shw me how and where exactly? or probably pls do it 4 me..as im clueless on how it can b done! :(
i ll see to it.. but trust me, ur thought process is different and only u would be knowin the core of ur post.. :)
yup tt true..bt im jus trying to gain universal acceptance..if not all thn a majority atleast! :)
thanx 4 ur help..i'll wait 4 a new sequence ^^
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